Friday, September 3, 2010
First Post
Welcome to my blog. My blog will not include personal information, other people's information and things that's not true. The purpose of this blog is to share my work at home and school. We need this blog so we can all get connected on blogs. I can share my thoughts and ideas in detail as I go through secondary school. I can share my work in my blog. For homework, I searched the bad way of using blogs and I've found a useful website: http://boundarysentinel.com/node/3552. I learned that people get into trouble by not using blogs correctly: putting personal information and pictures on their blogs. They lost their jobs and get blamed. I will always use my blog the right way.
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Melody, this is a good introduction. I really like the colors and layout of your site: they are simple, clear and professional.
ReplyDeleteHere are some things for you to think about and work on. How do you think you can distinguish between what is true and what is not? Please take some time to reread this piece and look for any language errors. For instance, you have said "I can share our thoughts", in which you use singular (I) and collective (our): this seems inconsistent.
For the homework, I really want you to write in detail about some of the dangers of blogging, and to use the case studies to illustrate your points. I am interested in your writing, not that of someone else!
See how you go with these changes and let me know if you have any questions.
Melody, This is a good introduction but you have forgot to add library thing and a document. Also what do you mean connect online? Is it like connecting on Skype?
ReplyDeleteMelody I like the way you welcomed me into your blog! It is very interesting. This way I know how to comment about you when I would want to. Maybe you could add more to your blog and put more interactive things in it. Because right now your blog is not very complete.
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